Jar-Jar Pleats and the Halloween Humdinger

 

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Chapter 1
By Tommy
It was the best of days, it was the worst of days at McQuarrie.
Yoda still hadn’t returned, and Dwight was always just sitting around either moping, looking at a new puppet while saying “geronimo” (I guess we’ll find out what that means later) and seeing how many sheet music renditions of “Eye of the Tiger” he could stuff into a small wooden box marked “hope chest”.

On the other hand, Kellen had made a 3D model of Willy the Walking Waffle out of an actual waffle and some lengths of wire, James Suervo had somehow gotten more people to join the LuckyYucky club despite the fact it didn’t exist anymore, and I was writing a new graphic novel much more exciting than “snail-cowboys”. Thing were pretty slightly-better-than-normal.

But of course… something happened.

Harvey’s Comment: Of course something will happen! Have you not been paying attention to ANYTHING?

Chapter 2
The Booger and the Envelope
by Tommy
It was, of course, almost halloween, which can make a regular, unassuming person dress up in the most unusual things you have ever seen.

So imagine what it did to Dwight.

Yes, Dwight, unarguably the weirdest student enrolled in any school system ever (well, in tandem with that Micah kid), came to school…

…dressed up as a booger.

Yes, a booger.

And he wasn’t just wearing a small tan sphere or something like that, no. His entire upper body (save his face and arms) was encased in the booger suit. And he had smeared vaseline all over it as well, which kind of worried us…

Then came the pumpkin. Dwight produced the largest plastic halloween pumpkin in the western hemisphere, which was, on first glance, just filled with more copies of “Eye of The Tiger”. But on closer inspection, we could see an envelope sticking out.
Dwight had no idea where it had come from, so we shall investigate…

Chapter 3
The Letter’s Contents
Author Unknown

In the School of McQuarrie of a misty day
A Sovereign puppet shall be folded of an infamous student
Surname of Pleats shall make him Posthumous
Never was there a puppet so annoying in its provenance

Chapter 4
The investigation begins
By Harvey

Well, after reading that little piece of crypticity, I knew immediately that it was a modified Nostradamus quote. Michel de Nostredame was a fortune teller in (REST OF PARAGRAPH DELETED BY TOMMY FOR EXTREME BORINGNESS)

Anyway, using my insane skills of deciphering, I figured out that what it meant was: On a foggy day, some weird or bad kid will make a puppet with the last name of Pleats, which will somehow shred him, and it’s annoying. Boo-yah.

Kellen’s Comment:
Umm… Dwight just made a Jar-Jar Pleats…

Chapter 5
The Infamous Puppet
By Kellen

Ok… that prophecy was uncanny…

But first, there are some things you need to know.
Dwight definitely didn’t write that letter. His punctuation is not that good, and neither is his handwriting. And he didn’t read it with the rest of us either. He just went back to his “Eye of the Tiger” stuffing.

And immediately after…
…He makes a Jar Jar Pleats and IMMEDIATELY starts annoying everyone with it.
I’m glad Harvey is good now, or we would NEVER hear the end of his “hoax” speech…

Anyway, getting out of the flashback here…
Today is Halloween.
It is foggy today.
Dwight annoys Zack Martin with JJP. Zack rips up JJP.
Just like the letter said it would.

So anyway… could this be a yoda prophecy from afar?

I guess we’ll never know…

END

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  1. chippy slusher

    That name for this is perfect! Thanks!

  2. Sure!

  3. chippy slusher

    oh, did you get my e-mail concerning the wiki?

  4. SuperFolder AustinC

    Amazing story!

  5. what is “eye of the tiger”?

  6. Nice story, Chippy!

  7. Thank you!

  8. Prologue

    “Gimme your lunch money, geek!” said a school bully, who was robbing some random guy of his lunch money.
    Spider-Fold and Cal came out of nowhere, interrupting the bullying session. “Hey, guys,” Cal said, punching the bully in the shoulder. The bully tried to punch back but Cal easily made the kid drop to the ground, though he didn’t fall unconscious.
    The bully then smacked Cal on the face several times. The bully got the upper hand, grabbed Spider-Fold, threw him out of the way, and was about to give a Cal the final blow when Cal said quickly, “Ezra! It’s your cue!”
    A boy named Ezra came out from behind the two and tackled the bully, attacking him with a paper Venom puppet.
    “WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU?!?” the bully said as Ezra grabbed him by the shirt, OrigVenom in other hand.
    “We…are OrigVenom,” said Ezra and “OrigVenom” in perfect sync. Ezra threw the bully out of the way, though he also did not fall unconscious.
    “Good job out there,” said Cal, rubbing his bruised cheek. “You saved my butt back there.”
    Now oyu’re Probably wondering, who is this Ezra kid? Well…heh-heh…it’s actually me. Let me go back to the beginning…A.K.A. only two months ago.

  9. My note: Noah, I just noticed there were a few spelling mistakes at the end of the prologue…oof…can you fix that?

  10. Chapter 1: Not-So-Humble Beginnings As A Reporter

    How am I now living it up with Cal a Largent and his puppet pal, Spider-Fold, you ask? Lemme tell you my story.
    The short way.
    So once upon a time Cal was defeating this lizard guy, but the lizard guy framed Cal, so Cal put together a team and defeated the lizard guy. Then I appeared and became friends with Cal. Yay! Story’s over.
    Oh wait. Forgot to tell you how I became the partner of Cal Largent and the wilder of OrigVenom.
    I’ll tell you that story…
    The long way.

  11. Chapter 2: At The Office

    I was at the backstage of the school auditorium, with my fellow editors and reporters. We were studying local happenings around the school for our next school newspaper issue. My friend, Elliott, was writing a review of the new Venom movie. In every issue of the school newspaper, these things are mandatory to include:
    1. One movie or TV show review
    2. One book review
    3. A weather prediction section (for some reason in the fall it’s very hot and sunny)
    4. At least one science article (this time it was my turn to do the since article)
    I was going to interview the leader of the L.I.F.E. (Little Ingenious Fractured Eco-studies) Science Club, who I heard from some of my fellow reporter, were supposedly…making unstable chemicals that could cause the human mind to almost go crazy. Wow.
    The L.I.F.E. Club leader’s name was Karl Blonsky Jr. His father was very rich until his company, “Edu-Fun,” collapsed due to some little group of students rebelling against some educational videos of his. Heard they were wielding…origami STAR WARS puppets. Really? Star Wars? That’s a geek thing. In Kirby and Wheeler, we’re much more proper, and we have our helpful little Marvel puppets. Much less weird than Star Wars puppets. Anyways, here I went, about to interview Karl Blonsky Jr. Boy, oh, boy. The day I interviewed that guy changed my life forever.

  12. My note: Noah, I said somewhere in chapter two “since article” instead of “science article.” Can you fix that?

  13. Chapter 3: How The Interview Went

    I walked up to Karl Blonsky. “Hello, sir,” I said, pencil and notebook in hand. “I’ve heard a lot about you. Great thing, yes.”
    “Oh yes, indeed,” Blonsky replied. “My team and I won the New York City Annual Science Fair two years in a row: 2016 and 2017. This year we’re planning to make it three years in a row.”
    “What are your hobbies?” I said, recording the conversation. He said, “Oh, well, reading, writing short stories, torturing people using unstable chemicals, and, of course, science. I am head of the science club, after all.”
    “Oh, but I’ve heard some recent shocking reports from some of my fellow reporters about—guess what—you and your team at the L.I.F.E. Science Club literally making unstable chemicals using even a few—illegal—ingredients. Wow, dude.”
    Karl then got a derisory look in his eyes. He said, “That’s…half true, not so much. Wait, are you recording me saying it’s true?”
    “Yes.”
    “GET HIM!”
    Two L.I.F.E. Club members grabbed me by the arms. “Is that a threat?”
    “Yes, indeed,” Karl said smugly, taking my notebook and pencil and throwing them behind and into a canister of chemicals. Right next to the canister was some black origami finger puppet.
    I kicked both guards in the shins and ran away, trying to escape the lab. I then saw a big flash of red go by me. As it went by, I saw a really well-folded origami Scream symbiotic puppet. The wielder appeared to be…a girl, not a boy. I accidentally bumped into the canister of chemicals, which went on the black origami finger puppet. I fell to the floor with the puppet on my hands. I then fell asleep.
    “Ezra.”
    “Who said that?”
    “I’m the black origami puppet that got effected by the chemicals and is now own your lap.”
    “These guys are trying to hurt me!”
    “I know. But trust me, okay? I can use my powers to save you, Ezra. Cooperate…and you just might survive.

  14. Chapter 4: We Cooperated And Survived, So Yeah, It Worked

    I woke up with the Venom puppet in my hands. I stood up tall and started running again. Recess had ended long before and though school was not over yet, the power in the science lab was off, and no one was in it. Thank gosh the door was unlocked.
    As I went out the door, the most unlucky thing happened: the bell. A bunch of students came in for lunch, and guess who saw me? That’s right. A group of L.I.F.E. SCIENCE CLUB GUARDS.
    “Ezra, run!” said the Venom puppet in my mind. So yeah, I started running. Who wouldn’t?
    I ran across the pavilion and school yard, but those guys still chased me. Then I felt him talking to me again.
    “Now is the time to use my powers.”
    I then tried to punch one of them, but it didn’t worked, and he punched me back. And then…
    “Time for me to come in.”
    I felt a surge of strength in my bones. Maybe it was OrigVenom. Maybe just me. But then I punched and kicked all of those guys until they were running away to their mamas.
    “See, Ezra? It’s good to be bad.”

  15. Chapter 5: Cal’s Reaction

    Cal saw it. All of it. He saw me attacking those L.I.F.E. Club members, though they tried to attack me first. He saw OrigVenom.
    I walked to Cal and he gently grabbed OrigVenom slowly from me and looked at it for a few minutes. “This is the Symbiote Spidey from the OriSpiderverse team. Those…those dirty L.I.F.E. Science guys turned the Symbiote into…this thing.”
    “It’s Venom now,” I said, taking the Venom puppet back. “And I’m calling it…uh…Orig…OrigVenom.”
    “Why does it feel greasy, Ezra?”
    “Hazardous chemicals.”
    “WHAT?”
    I then walked away from Cal.

  16. Chapter 6: I’m Going Crazy

    As Ezra walked away from me, I started to feel dizzy.
    I went into a few bushes. I felt sick in my stomach. Something was wrong.
    Were it those chemicals? Gosh darn it. Ezra must think “OrigVenom” is sentient and is corrupting him. I’ve gotta stop him.
    I pulled out Spider-Fold to stop Ezra, but then the weirdest thing happened…
    “Cal.”
    Spider-Fold was talking to me.

  17. Chapter 7: Something Weird Happened

    The next day at recess, everything was pretty much back to normal except for me starting to get slowly more evil and corrupted. Maybe it’s OrigVenom. Maybe I should throw him away. Should’ve never interviewed Karl Blonsky Jr., that little punk.
    At recess I also saw Cal up in a tree, hooting like an owl. Did he get effected by the chemicals when he touched OrigVenom? I saw him saying a bunch of crazy sayings to Spider-Fold. Um…okay then.
    I saw Clark saying, “CAL! Get down here! What are you doing? Spider-Fold can’t reply to you?”
    “Yes he can, he’s ALIIIIIIIIIIVE! Hoot-hoot-hoot!” Cal said in a crazy voice. What happened to my friend?
    I walked up to Clark and said, “Any idea of what happened?”
    “I think he touched something that’s driving him to the point of insanity.”
    I hid OrigVenom in my back-pocket. Didn’t want Iron-Fold, Kirby’s best protector, to be driven to insanity also.
    I then slowly walked away from Clark. Thank gosh he didn’t notice OrigVenom.

  18. My note: Noah, I juuuuuust noticed in chapter one I wrote “Cal a Largent.” S-T-U-P-I-D autocorrect. Can you, uh, fix that?

  19. My note: All my chapters are awaintb moderation.

  20. Chapter 8: How Do I Do This Again?

    “HOOT-HOOT-HOOT I’M AN OWL BOYYYYYYS,” is all I can say. A day ago, my pen pal from Virignia, Dwight, told me to keep bing weird.
    *gulp*
    I fear Spider-Fold is not taking over like how OrigVenom is taking over Ezra. I think Ezra just got lucky. All that’s happening to me is…these chemicals are driving me to insanity.

  21. My note: Oof. I wrote “bing weird” in chapter eight instead of “being weird.” Fix that also, please?

  22. Chapter 9: A Few Weeks Later

    I have become a popular kid now. I’m using OrigVenom’s powers for good. I am replacing Spider-Fold and Cal on the popularity scale. I have, in fact, teamed up with the OrigAvengers a few times. I’m living it up.
    “Hi, Cal!” said Elliott, my fellow reporter.
    “Good morning to ya, Cal!” said Clark.
    “How’s it going lately, Cal?” Tilly said.
    “I like owls!” Cal said.
    But then, today, Karl and his science team confronted me on the school yard.
    Lemme tell you how it went.

  23. Chapter 9.5: My Growing Life

    Before we get to the confrontation between me and Karl, I think it’s time I explain some things about myself.
    My eye color is brown. Hair’s black. Favorite color? Blue. Favorite food? Chocolate-chip pancakes.
    And I think I’m growing a crush on…believe it or not…Tilly Waterson.
    Ermagherd.

  24. My note: All versions of chapter eight had Samantha in them, and her last name C-U-R-T might’ve been mistaken by the autocorrect to be an…inappropriate..bad word. So I’m replacing Ezra’s love interest with Tilly.
    1. I hope Camster is okay with this
    2. In this story Tilly will wield both the Hulk and Scream
    3. I still hope Camster is okay with this
    4. I forgot most of the Unshreddible Hulk so I don’t remember if Tilly has a love interest or not
    5. Venom and the Hulk, sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G

  25. Chapter 10: The Battle Begins

    “Well, well, well,” said Karl. “If it isn’t Ezra Cronin. Mr. Corbin, you have stolen from us. Give the origami specimen back.”
    “You stole it from an OriSpiderverse team member,” I said. “It’s mine now, not yours.”
    “I guess you’re right…” Karl said, trailing off. He added, “NOT! Get him!”
    Two more L.I.F.E. Club members grabbed me by the arms. But I got free of their grasp again.
    Karl said, “Technically, if you’re not planning to not give it back to the Symbiote Spidey’s owner, you’re also stealing. We all have our problems. Breakups. Divorced. What’s yours?”
    “OrigVenom. He’s my problem. But I’m learning to deal with him.”
    “And I’m learning to deal with my friend, too,” Karl said, pullled out none other than an origami Riot.
    “The perfect adversary,” Karl said.
    “And in my hands.”

  26. My note: Noah, sorry for bothering you again, but I wrote “Corbin” instead of “Cronin” at the beginning of chapter ten. Fix it? Plz? 😅

  27. Chapter 11: Main Event Time

    Just as I was about to punch Karl in his big ego-inflated face, Cal came OUT OF NOWHERE WITH SPIDER-FOLD AND AN ORIGAMI TOXIN!
    Cal punched Karl in the face for me. “I. Love. OWLLLLLLLLLLLS!” Cal yelled as he kicked Karl right in the trunk.
    I was about to punch a L.I.F.E. Club member in the arm when someone stopped me: Tilly, who looked dazed and was holding…believe it or not…the origami Scream from earlier. I should’ve known. She folds origami perfectly. And the Unshreddible Hulk puppet was nowhere.
    “How could you?!” I said. “Tilly, what have they done?”
    “Nothing,” Tilly replied. “In fact, you’re the one who is doing things, not them. I serve the L.I.F.E. Science Club now. You can hurt people. You have very strong muscles, Ezra, and you can inflict harm. And that little Venom puppet of yours is doing nothing to help you! In fact, it’s making you worse!”
    I grabbed Origami Scream from her and accidentally made it unfold. When it unfolded, it turned into the Unshreddible Hulk. That’s where it was.
    “C’mon, Tilly! This isn’t yourself! I…I love you! And much more than a friend!”
    Then Tilly started to look less and less dazed.
    She kissed me. And…
    “EXCUSE ME!” Karl yelled.
    Awkward silence befell the school yard.
    “Cal is in the middle of kicking me in the shins, and you two are kissing? Ew! Snap out of it! Let’s get back to battling against me!”
    As the battle started again, Cal threw Origami Toxin across the field to Tilly, who now had two puppets.
    So now it was three of us. Me, Tilly, and Cal, just fighting a bunch of L.I.F.E. Science Club people. Best. Day. Ever.

  28. Chapter 12: Witnessing A Battle

    I, Clark Largent, was drinking my morning cup of coffee with Dove and Andy when we saw Karl Blonsky Kr. and his science team beating up Ezra.
    “Should we help?” Andy asked me.
    “Nah, the kid has OrigVenom,” I said.
    I then saw my former apprentice Cal Largent (who has been drawn to the brink of insanity by something) going in front of Ezra and punching Karl.
    “I love owls!” We heard Cal say.
    “Well, that kid’s lost,” Dove said. Dove made Thorigami say, “We should help Friend Ezra and Friend Cal defeat Karl and his crew.”
    “Leave them,” Andy said. “Cal’s handling Karl pretty well.”
    We then saw Tilly walking up to Ezra, who was trying to punch a L.I.F.E. Club member. Tilly stopped Ezra from hitting the guy.
    “Friend Tilly?!” Thorigami said. “What are you doing?!”
    We saw the strangest and grossest thing of all after that: Tilly kissing Ezra.
    “Oh no!” Thorigami said. “Tilly, what have you done?”
    “Ew, I’m looking away,” I said.
    “Walkman no!” Andy said, dabbing, and trying not to focus on the kissing.
    Karl then scolded Tilly and Ezra for kissing in the middle of a battle.
    Cal threw Tilly an origami Toxin from across the field.
    “Okay, that was disturbing,” Dove said. “The image of Ezra and Tilly kissing is gonna be in my head forever. What can be seen cannot be unseen.”
    “Young love,” I said, smiling. “They act like me and Emily.”
    “Well…,” Andy said. “I’m gonna be a fanfaction writer. I ship it! I’ll make a fic about them.”
    “Please don’t,” I said, sighing.

  29. Chapter 13: What Happened Next

    Me, Tilly, and Cal were basically done with the L.I.F.E. Science Club. All that was left to defeat was Karl and a few others.
    “Origami Riot cannot be contained,” Karl said, trying to punch me in the face. After he tried to punch me, he tried to grab OrigVenom. I could feel it starting to make a ripping noise.
    “No! OrigVenom, don’t die on me!” I said. But then, I realized in my head…OrigVenom can be repaired. He’s just a puppet. And that power was me all along, not OrigVenom. And I also realized…it was the chemicals that made me think OrigVenom was alive. And if I’m still effected with the chemicals…then…OrigVenom will always be with me.”
    I let OrigVenom be ripped in half. As Karl held what was left of OrigVenom, he said, “I…I feel strange.” He then realized he was getting effected with the chemicals now. Karl looked dazed and said slowly:
    “I love SQUIRRRRRRRREEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLS!”
    Karl ran away from us, with Riot rolling out of his hands and into a group of tall trees near the school yard.
    “Well…that was easy,” I said. “Is…is the day saved? By us?”
    “Yes,” Cal replied. “I guess so. And now, Ezra, I realize…OrigVenom can be used for good. I think we’ve all learned a lesson today. Tilly? Love. Ezra? Self-confidence. Me? Not to be driven to insanity. Now let’s go back to shop and repair OrigVenom, eh?”

  30. Epilogue

    Me and Tilly were in Wendy’s with Cal and Spider-Fold as our third wheel. We were on a double date with Jesse and Jessica, with Director Adams as their third wheel. It was very awkward.
    “So…how’s the pen pal from Virginia going?” Jesse said to Cal.
    “Oh, Dwight? Good. He says he likes squirrels, not owls, though,” Cal replied.
    Still awkward.
    We then looked to the right to see Andy staring at me and Tilly through the window of Wendy’s. He was holding a notebook and a pen.
    “Notice me, senpai,” he said to me and Tilly. Ew. Uh…I don’t know what that’s about.

    Second Epilogue

    Hello. I am an anonymous narrator. Ezra or Cal or Clark was not here to witness these evens, so I’ll narrate it myself. In the group of tall trees near the school yard, Origami Riot stood, unharmed. A person who’s face was concealed because of his hoodie being over his head picked up Riot and colored him red with a sharpie. And then…origami Carnage was born. Carnagami. The true ultimate threat to OrigVenom.

  31. Written by SLS

    With support by SF CrimsonDawn, Jar Jar Pleats, OrigamiLuke100, SF Camster and Noah
    With characters from the stories of SF Camster, Noah, SuperDoodler CJ, Tom Angleberger (because Dwight’s in this), and SF Mega3

    Thank you all for the support through the months! I’ve been working on this little Spider-Fold spin-off story of mine since the MOU was announced! Criticism is allowed, as this is my first time writing for the EU, and all stories need criticism, but nothing too negative. Also, yes, I am trolling all of you. I know all of you dislike the “no negative commenting” rule.

  32. My note: So, yeah, Noah. That’s OrigVenom. Sure, the villain might be a bit too underdeveloped, but most MOU villains are! I don’t know how CJ was able to pull off a good MOU villain in Thorigami! And Tilly also might be super underdeveloped, but meh, still. She and Ezra had their sweet moment and that’s all that counts. And she was originally gonna appear in a few chapters before, but I forgot to put her in. Her only appearance before the chapter “Main Event Time” was in chapter 9. Also, can you proofread OrigVenom? There are spelling mistakes here and there.
    So, now you’re wondering, Noah, what future plans do I have for Ezra and his little origami friend? Well…remember when Ezra said he even teamed up a few times with the OrigAvengers but wasn’t a member of them? Well, yeah. You know what I’ve got planned now. 😉

  33. My note: Also, don’t put any of these “my notes” in the actual finished product. Just proofread OrigVenom.

  34. My notes: Oh gosh, in chapter 9 everyone keeps saying “Cal” instead of “Ezra.” Can you fix that? Oopsie.

  35. Also in the “second epilogue” it says “evens” instead of “events”

  36. I’ll definitely have to edit this to fit with the secret plans we have for the MOU. Don’t ask what those are, they’re secret. But again, good job.

  37. One thing: Andy would definitely not be a fanfiction writer. Andy is the calm. collected leader of the OrigAvengers and he wouldn’t be one for shipping. Also, how does Clark get cured? I would suggest adding a reasoning for him to get back to normal. That’s the only main things I’d have you change.

  38. What do you mean, Clark get cured? Huh. Maybe I missed something when reading the OrigAvengers. Also, it’s just 4 laughs. Andy’s fanfic career doesn’t mean anything. It’s just to be funny.
    Also, if you edit it for the secret plans in the MOU, will the story change a lot, or just a small bit?

    P.S. I like owls (instead of squirrels).

  39. I meant Cal getting cured of his owl obsession.
    Well, the general story will remain the same. The major things that will changing the love interest back to Samantha and other things which I can’t disclose. The story of OrigVenom will not be affected, however.

  40. Okay. I guess Tilly can be witnessing the events of Samantha and Ezra kissing, too, in the “Witnessing A Battle” chapter. Make her the one who is obsessed with shipping them.
    It’s just, for some reason in early versions of chapter 8, Samantha appeared, but every time I posted chapter 8 it awaits moderation until I decided on the version of chapter 8 with Cal narrating. Also, here’s the explanation:
    Cal has yet to be fully cured, that’s why he still likes owls, but at least he regains sanity over the course of the ultimate battle.

  41. Just don’t change the story too much. I don’t want it to feel like your story, not mine.

  42. Okay then it’s settled. OrigVenom is happening. I’ll just have to wait until December.

    I’m waiting…and waiting…

    TWO MONTHS LATER IN NOVEMBER

    Still watching…and waiting…

  43. Okay, so since Tilly isn’t the love interest anymore, make Dove say only “Friend Ezra,” not “Friend Ezra” and “Friend Tilly” also. Also, can you replace the frankly filler chapter 8 with a chapter from Samantha’s perspective, explaining what happened after chapter 7.
    So, basically, the plot of the chapter 8 I want you to make is this:
    Ezra is backing away still from Clark and Cal, and sees this guy trying to get another guy’s lunch money. So Samantha sees Ezra deal with the guy, earning Ezra her respect. Also, it’s an adaption of the “Eyes, lungs, pancreas” scene from Venom, except Ezra makes OrigVenom say “pencils, erasers, paperclips.”
    And, make Samantha say hi to Ezra in chapter 9 instead of Tilly, and make Ezra reveal he has a crush on her in chapter 9.5 instead of Tilly.
    And make Tilly the Ezra—Samantha shipper, not Andy,

  44. Also I cut out a chapter of OrigVenom that you may wanna put in, though it just adds to the battle, that being it:

    Chapter 12.5: A Tale Of Two Symbiote Puppets

    As Ezra tried to kick Karl in the trunk, Karl used a karate move on Ezra and nearly grabbed OrigVenom away from him. But Ezra grabbed OrigVenom back at the last second.
    “STAY AWAY FROM ME, BLONSKY!” Ezra said, punching Karl in the side.
    “Yeah, we should help them,” I said to Andy and Dove and Tilly. They all agreed. So we got out the Unshreddible Hulk, Captain Americut (which was now finished), Thorigami, and I got out Iron-Fold. Andy said, “OrigAvengers…assemb—”
    “Let’s go already! That Karl kid is inflicting harm!” I said, already running onto the school yard.
    Meanwhile, Karl revealed a bunch of hidden mechanisms he installed to Origami Riot. Karl pulled a paper lever at the back of Origami Riot, causing a short and spiky-shaped paper hammer to come right towards OrigVenom. Luckily Ezra blocked OrigVenom from getting damaged.
    Tilly was fighting two L.I.F.E. Science Club goons with Samantha and her new origami Toxin from Cal while I was taking on Karl with Ezra and, well, Cal himself. Andy pretty much accidentally unfolded Captain Americut and was too busy putting him back together to fight also.
    “Uh, thanks for coming, guys, but I really do think I can do this alone!” Ezra said to me and Tilly. “No prob,” Tilly said, going away from the fight to help Andy repair Captain Americut.
    I stayed for a little while longer, but then left, also. So did Dove.

  45. A few issues I had with the prequel:
    – How did Karl program Cal to pick up Toxin? Cal’s not a computer or a machine.
    – Cal is almost never serious. He’s goofy and daring most of the time. Also, Cal doesn’t join the OrigAvengers at the end.

  46. —Karl has his ways. I know them, but I won’t reveal his ways. I’m a very secretive guy nowadays. 😉
    —Sorry if I made Cal too serious in the unofficial OrigVenom prequel. Also, Cal is literally Brothers with Clark. He’s bound to have at least some ties with the OrigAvengers, alright?

  47. Wow. I…I’m astonished. That’s a masterpiece compared to OrigVenom, not to be self-judgmental. And that epilogue…oh yes, Mega. Oh yes.

  48. It’s pretty terrible to me right now at this stage. I still need to work on it a lot more.

  49. I have one problem, though: Cal loves Fortnite. Really?! Your co-creator of OrigVenom, SLS over here, doesn’t really like Fortnite. But fine. Keep it in there. I don’t want you to erase a chapter or anything. I have something to show you, also. Since you made a chapter in Spider-Fold with Fortnite, I made a fanmade OrigAvengers chapter of the OrigAvengers, Cal, and Ezra playing Bendy and the Ink Machine Chapter 2. If you don’t play the game, this will be really confusing.

    A Game Of Ink And Bacon Soup
    By Clark Largent

    Okay, so basically that evil science-obsessed geek Karl Blonsky Jr. and his team of goons were at it again with their evil unstable chemicals and symbiote origami puppets, so to come up with a plan, me and Cal invited the other OrigAvengers and that kid Ezra, who wields a symbiote puppets he stole from the L.I.F.E. Science Club: OrigVenom, for a sleepover to make a plan to fight Blonsky and his goons. We ended up glued to the screen, playing Bendy and the Ink Machine Chapter 2, though me and Cal insisted we play Fortnite. But Tilly, Andy, and Ezra rejected, while Dove and Jesse and Jessica had no opinions.
    “Okay, what’s this thing?” Tilly said, making the player in Bendy pick up something called a tommy gun.
    Suddenly a DEFORMED VERSION OF BENDY SUDDENLY CAME OUT OF AN INK PORTAL AND WAS WALKING TOWARDS US.
    “Run! Run! Run!” I said, running away. Andy died.
    “Darn it!” He said.
    He then saw a figure wearing a dirty ink-stained Bendy mask and wearing brown overalls. It seemed to be an ink-covered version of Sammy Lawrence, the former musical director of the studio.
    “Okay, first one Bendy, now another,” Tilly said in frustration. Ezra, who loves this game and knows all about its lore, said, “He’s just wearing a stained Bendy mask. It’s not another Bendy.”
    And…then Sammy knocked us out unconscious.
    “Crap,” Tilly said. “Excuse me for the language, tho.”
    Then we woke up tied to a chair, with Sammy looking at us. We were in his “sanctuary,” basically his former office from before the events of Bendy, when everything in the studio was normal and not paranormal and ink-covered. Sammy said, “Wakey, my little sheeps.”
    Sammy explained how he’d be sacrificing us to his “lord and savior,” Bendy. Sammy said if he sacrificed us, he’d probably get free of his ink-covered form. Noice plan, but, uh…in the process we’d be dead. So we escaped with the help of bacon soup!” Right at ya, bacon soup. Thanks for helping us. 😂👍
    After that we had to flee from Bendy again and a bunch of slimy slug-like ink monsters called Searchers, who are really annoying, though they seemed innocent at first. Then Sammy found us and was about to talk with Bendy and put us in another room outside. And…we heard Bendy killing Sammy. Ouch. Looks like that plan would’ve worked if it was the nice, cartoon Bendy, not this real-life deformed Bendy with ink over his eyes. Then we got attached by Searchers AGAIN and we escaped, only to be found by BORIS THE WOLF. NOT A DEOFMRED BORIS. A REAL CARTOON-ACCURATE BORIS. YEET.
    Anyways, after that the chapter ended and we had to stop slouching around and had to get to work and think of a plan. Ugh. It was already midnight by that point.

  50. I was not my idea for Cal to like Fortnite. It was clearly stated in the original outline that the council gave me that Cal had to like Fortnite.

  51. Oh. Alright.
    Also, I’m not that happy with this fanmade chapter, as I think near the end it just felt like a generic gameplay video on YouTube of Bendy Chapter 2. But Meh. No offense, but the Fortnite chapter wasn’t that good, either. The other parts were good, though.

  52. Also I see dat list of emails at the obbtom of the Doc. Noice. Wonder how Noah will respond.

  53. Cal was the character created by me, who now is Mega’s character. Mega decides what Cal is like. You work around his stuff, not the other way around.

  54. Oh. Sorry. Didn’t know Mega felt like I thought he was working around my stuff. I guess I was acting inappropriate.
    Wait the main characters are created by you?
    What about the puppets?
    *gasp*

  55. I have at least conceptualized about 90% of the MOU characters. That doesn’t mean that they are mine, because I hand them off to all of the writers.

  56. Noah can you replace the filler chapter 8 with a chapter from Samantha’s point of view of her seeing Ezra defeating a bully with OrigVneom after backing away from Cal in that tree and Clark in chapter 7. Chapter 8 is short and just filler to me.

  57. Also plz respond.

  58. Okay. You can go ahead and “probably” give Samantha a chapter in OrigVenom to develop her character…she’s very underdeveloped…also, did you see Venom yet? Woody Harrelson in that terrible red wig! XD

  59. “Tilly adores the director”
    —The Imperfect Iron-Fold

    Oopsie. Forgot most of the Unshreddible Hulk and Agents of F.O.L.D. and made Tilly Ezra’s love interest. Oooooops. 😬

  60. Plz respond to my comment about Tilly and Director Adams. And this optional additional chapter.

    Chapter 12.5: Some Good Ol’ Fighting

    Karl used a paper mechanism on the back of Riot to pull a long paper hammer out of the side of Riot. Riot’s hammer almost shredded OrigVenom, but luckily in time, Ezra moved OrigVenom out of the way and punched Karl in the nose. “Oh, god…,” Karl said. “You’re definitely gonna have to pay for that!”
    Karl then pulled two more sharp paper weapons out of the site of Riot and tried to hurt OrigVenom more and more times.
    Then the impossible happened: Karl grabbed OrigVenom out of Ezra’s hands as harsh as it can get, and literally removed one of Riot’s paper weapons out of the way and put OrigVenom inside Riot. It made Origami Riit look bigger, a tiny bit uglier, and more hulky.
    “You’re no match for me,” Karl said. He then pick up a large sharp-looking stick off the grassy ground and shoved it into Ezra.
    “Heh. Now I’ll deal with your puny friends,” Karl said, going away from Ezra with Riot. OrigVenom dropped out of the side of Origami Riot without Karl noticing. It fell next to the damaged Ezra.
    “Ezra, I can heal you,” it said in Ezra’s mind. “With my powers. We can stop Riot and Mr. Blonsky once and for all.”
    Ezra then slowly nodded. He got up, held OrigVenom on his finger, and then quickly pulled the stick out of his body.
    “OWWWWW!” Ezra said.

  61. Chapter 13: Is This The End Already? (alternate version you might wanna use)

    Samantha and Cal were fighting the remaining L.I.F.E. goons while Ezra and OrigVenom were lurking in the shadows, ready to strike Riot and Karl. Cal got hit in the eye by one of Karl’s fellow L.I.F.E. Science Club members, but then Cal got revenge by pushing the guy away from him and onto the ground. Samantha was fighting someone else when they ripped Toxin out of her hands and shred it to pieces.
    “Aw…,” she said. “First Origami Scream, now Toxin.”
    “Hey! I worked hard on that Toxin origami!” Cal said, and he punched the guy Samantha was fighting in the face.
    “Oh, I know! I’ll make an origami She-Venom!” Samantha said.
    “Make sure it has big boobs.”
    “Wait what?”
    “Nothing, Samantha. Go on.”
    Meanwhile, Ezra and Riot were—oh, wait a second! Chapters 12.5 and this one, chapter 13, aren’t narrated by Ezra! Before we continue, lemme explain myself! My name is Howard Blonsky, little brother of Karl Blonsky Jr., and I never liked the L.I.F.E. Science Club’s goals and almost always disagreed with my brother. I am the anonymous narrator of this story, and my puppet is an origami Utah the Watcher. I call him TheWatcher. I don’t know why there’s no spacing between the letters. :\ Anyways, back with the story!
    Ezra and OrigVenom came out of hiding. They stroked at Riot and Karl Blonsky Jr.
    “Get AWAY!” Karl said. “Ezra, get out of here, ya little nuisance!”
    “Nyyyyyope!”
    OrigVenom and Ezra pushed Karl and Riot out of the way. Karl and his puppet went into a large puddle near the boys’ bathroom. Cal came out of the bathroom and said, “Looks like I just pooped out all those chemicals that made me go insane! Byesies! Have a nice life, Blonsky!”
    “NOOO!” Karl said, still having some of his sanity left. He shoved Ezra’ head into the puddle, but that wasn’t gonna work, since Ezra had already been infected with the chemicals and had survived. But then…Ezra felt something inside him. OrigVenom. He was…not real. Just a puppet, and because Ezra got infected with those chemicals, he became a tiny bit insane and believed OrigVenom was real and alive. But now that Ezra knows the chemicals are already inside him…OrigVenom will always be with him. And that’s when OrigVenom dropped out of Ezra’s hands, and Ezra shoved himself out of the way, making him believe OrigVenom was shoving him out of the way to protect him.
    “Goodbye,” OrigVenom said.
    Karl suddenly felt weak. “I…,” He said. “I LOVE SQUIRRRREEEEEELLLLLLSSSSSS!”
    Samantha, holding an origami She-Venom with exaggerated boobs (heh-heh that sneaky devil Cal) came from behind Ezra. The trio watched as Riot disintegrated into the puddle of chemicals while Karl went off, now insane.
    “Looks like we all learned a valuable lesson today. Samantha, love. You, Ezra, self-confidence. Me? Not to go insane again and worship squirrels. Now, c’mon, let’s go to the shop and get OrigVenom repaired before he fully becomes a pile of dust in a puddle of my insides.”
    Right then, a boy with blue hair in overalls appeared, following a butterfly. Ezra could faintly hear the butterfly say something like, “You need to find your special one! Everyone has a special one!” Ezra squished the butterfly jokingly and:
    “Pesky bee.”

    I’ll be posting the alternate (and hopefully better) versions of the epilogue and second epilogue later.

  62. Your old chapters are just fine. We won’t be using the alternates.

  63. Okay meesa dude. Just…uh…replace all things Tilly with Samantha and make her an extra chapter from her point of view. Bye. 😛

  64. Okay, I updated the acknowledgments, because now I realize my original version was pretty cheesy, and don’t you say the original acknowledgements were good enough, cuz I’m UPDATING IT ANYWAYS.
    Also can OrigVenom have a sequel if it’s a one-shot? Just wondering.

    The Acknowledgements
    Thank you all for this story! I would’ve never have got here to creating an actual MOU story (technically a one-shot though XD), if it wasn’t for people like Mega, CD, Jar Jar, basically all the mods since they confirmed my story, and a lot more! Oh, and did you guys know that the mods have “secret plans” for the MOU? Yeah, and they are [bleep], [bleep] [bleeping] [bleep], and [bleep] [bleeps] [bleeeep].
    Haha! Did you think I’d actually reveal them? I don’t even know the secret plans! No one does except for the mods! They just mentioned them. Anyways, uh, this is getting long, soooo….thanks to JC and SF Jawa for creating this website itself, and also thanks to SF Noah for, well, y’know, having to deal with ME through this whole process.
    And, uh, yeah! I’m done. Show’s over. Go home. Watch Don’t Hug Me I’m Scared 3 and stuff. I don’t care.
    From,
    SLS

  65. Also you can cut off the part about me talking about those secret plans you guys have.

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