Iron Fold Returns…

The continued adventures of Clark Largent and Iron Fold are now available for your viewing pleasure! But it’s not entirely as you’d expect, and the line between hero and villain is not clearly seen at times. Read the story here: The Imperfect Iron Fold

As always, when you’re done comment what you thought here or on the story itself. And above all, enjoy the beginning of the Marvel Origami Universe: Fold 2!

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Posted on October 6, 2018, in Uncategorized. Bookmark the permalink. 76 Comments.

  1. This was a great story but it had some issues in MOU canon and Cassidy Lashay suddenly appears without introduction in the chapter where Clark is beating up Jameson.

  2. Oh, and I thought Batfold was supposed to come out earlier than Imperfect Iron Fold. Is it being delayed?

  3. Welp, the Cassidy thing is fixed.
    What issues in particular?

  4. Like how Clark and Cal’s dad died instead of him leaving the family as previously disclosed in Iron Fold. Or how Clark probably shouldn’t be that shocked about his mom telling him that Ricky was Cardboard Machine because that was already revealed in Iron Fold.

  5. Dang, you’re right. It’s been awhile since I’ve read the original. I’ll get those fixed up.

  6. Okay, it’s all fixed I think.

  7. This was a good story. The “chameleons hide in the shadows” thing was perfect. Though…a bit too short…wanted to see more of Calrk and Cal together in chapters… but meh, 8/10…

  8. Also I basically spoiled the Chamelon’s existence in that tiny little OrigVenom “trailer” of mine…I called him “lizard dude”…oh, maybe this is why they released this story early!

  9. Oh, and Noah, tell James D. Skull I say hi.
    (Yes I remember.)

  10. H E L L O T H E R E

  11. W H E N ‘ S B A T F O L D C O M I N G O U T

  12. Does anyone even care about me anymore

    I bet you could delete the comments from me from thursday-today and the conversation would still make sense

  13. Is this… The end of me and the OYEU and my friends there?

    Notice me plz

    Just take note

  14. I DON’T REALLY KNOW IF I WANT TO STAY HERE

  15. OrigamiLuke100

    I’m here. Don’t feel that way, homie. I was filming a football game, so i was a bit preoccupied

  16. Dude
    DUDE
    Just because you’re not in a couple conversations doesn’t mean you’ve been abandoned
    Also your complaining about it just makes it worse, methinks

    But don’t worry
    https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/dhmis/images/9/9d/Shrig.png/revision/latest?cb=20160621214145
    “You will never be alone…”
    —Shrignold, Don’t Hug Me I’m Scared 3

  17. I agree with SLS.

    Also that pesky bee scares me.

  18. Oh yeah when is Batfold coming out? You guys have both ignored me and CrimsonDawn’s comments about it.

  19. Oh, sorry about that.
    I believe Batfold is coming out either tomorrow or Monday.

  20. Jar Jar Pleats

    Boss Nass: Meeeeesa lika dis.

    Didn’t even notice continuity errors. A few spelling and indentation mistakes, especially when (*spoiler*) is revealed to be the “bad guy” there’s a weird indentation problem.

  21. Jar Jar Pleats

    This means two weeks ’till All-Winners, right? Or is it one week?

  22. I fear no man…
    but that thing…
    *looks at pesky bee*
    …it scares me.

  23. Jar Jar Pleats

    Can somebody please answer my question? I don’t wanna be pushy, but I need to figure out how to manage the next week or two of my time accordingly.

  24. If it’s following the normal release schedule, then two weeks from now.

  25. Jar Jar Pleats

    Cue the *doot doot* skeleton memes

  26. Jar Jar Pleats

    Spooky Scary Skeletons,
    Send shivers down your spine

  27. Jar Jar Pleats

    Classic, absolutely classic.

    Anybody seen Venom yet? I wanna know if all the bad press is just critics talking.

  28. Look on the Rotten Tomatoes audience reviews for Venom. 99% of them are positive.

  29. Two weeks, yes, Jar Jar.

  30. Jar Jar Pleats

    Thanks, Noah
    Haha ha, yes. Critics tend to do that with certain movies. The opposite happened with that horror movie Hereditary. Critics gave it A’s, but the CinemaScore for audiences was a D+.I don’t see the point in critics half the time. What matters is how everyday ppl liked it

  31. Yeah, Venom was lit. In fact, Noah, meet me in the place where I wrote the manuscript for OrigVenom, I’m posting optional additional chapters that adapt fight scenes from the Venom movie.

  32. Jar Jar Pleats

    Adapt…fight scenes? Copying fight scenes?😬
    Kidding of course, bc we’ve had this conversa tion b4

  33. Loosely adapting fight scenes.

    *mild spoilers for the Venom movie below*

    By adapting fight scenes, I meant incorporating parts of some of the movie’s fight scenes into the optional additional chapters. Like an origami [spoiler] appears briefly in OrigVenom (she looks close to OrigVenom himself and has big boobs—hee-hee—so guess who she is) like how [spoiler] appears briefly in Venom after Eddie separated from Venom.

  34. Anyways, plz do not worry, Jar Jar! HOLD YO LITTLE CHEESE

  35. Jar Jar Pleats

    Watch yo profanity, child…😄

    No but seriously

    NOT THE CHEESE!

  36. Jar Jar Pleats

    Btw, I think I came up with a better pun:
    How about Ven-ami? Venom origami? Ven-omi might make sense also. Its at least more than slapping Orig- in front of the name. Tell me what you think. At least think about it?

  37. Huh. That’s surprisingly better…
    BUT I’M STILL KEEPING ORIGVENOM AS THE NAME. NOAH, IF YOU HCANGE ORIGVENOM’S NAME, I WILL KILL.

  38. Also…

    knock knock, let the devil in…🎶
    But wait, I’m Jewish, Jews are totally against the devil.
    What if the devil is in the form of the Venom symbiote?
    Okay, I’m letting the devil in tonight! 😃

  39. Hm…what if Don’t Hug Me I’m Scared was Venom…that pasty bee and Yellow Guy would be a good Venom/Eddie duo…

    https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/donthugme/images/a/ac/YellowDHMIS3.png/revision/latest?cb=20141110022829

    “Knock knock, let the pesky bee in!”
    —Eminem

  40. Or…eveeeeen better…

    KNOCK KNOCK LET THE CHEESE IN

  41. Forget the “knock knock let the ___ in” thing!

    Guys I’m listening to CD! I just searched up the first set photos from that Star Wars live-action TV show, the Mandalorian…hmm…wait a sec…one of these guys’s helmets looks strangely like the helmet of a Knight of Ren member…

    (I’m talking about the guy on the left)

  42. And OH MY GOD THIS IS THE GUY FROM AFTERMATH WHO BOUGHT BOBA FETT’S ARMOR ISN’T IT

    Wow…Boba Fett’s amror is now brown…I like it… #hype

  43. Cool

  44. By the way kidloki108…didn’t know who Kid Loki was until you came around…he looks pretty cool…to bad now he’s regular Loki again—I think…

  45. He recently appeared in Asgardians of the galaxy piloting the destroyer suit. Great to have him back. If it really is him. Hmmmm

  46. Also btw I’m super hyped for your OrigVenom story. Looks great and I loved the trailer.

  47. Why thanks!

    Now go and get that pile of cheese and stuff it down Jar Jar’s throat!

  48. Hey Noah, did SF Firk ever email you guys about writing an MOU story? I would really like to see him make a return in the SF community.

  49. Yeah, my first comment ever on the OYEU was about his so-called story he was gonna produce. Wonder what happened.

  50. From what I’ve heard it’s not supposed to have anything to do with Jango or Boba.

    The cheese?😅Not the cheese.😦NOT the Cheese! 😧 Anything but THE CHEESE!!!😖
    Oh the humanity, the CHEEEESSSEE!!!!😵

  51. There’s a mistake here. I think you meant:
    *$1.0000000000000000000000000000000
    Yeah, sure I can pay you a dollar.
    Also I don’t get “the cheese.” What does it mean?

  52. YOU KNOW YOU WANT MORE. Also nah since EU or MOU stories don’t need to be funded, this is just a joke. But my real goal out of this is to make a real DHMIS OYEU spin-off series. I promise I’ll make it kid-friendly. No cheese-bashing. Also the whole “cheese” thing is a joke between me and Jar Jar because on the MOU Discussion Page once I wrote “I can hear Jar Jar saying, ‘hold you cheese, SLS!’”

  53. Pahhaps (fake British accent)

  54. GUYD WHY WAS THE COMMENT DELETED

  55. I guess my plan to make DHMIAS come to life has already been sabotaged…
    …pesky bees. 😡

  56. Okay then I guess I’m kidnapping me, CD, Mega, and Jar Jar anyway, because I like torturing people, even if it’s myself included!
    (This is just a joke. Don’t delete this comment at least.)

    [Mega, CD, SLS, and Jar Jar appear in someone’s dirty ol’ basement, with a sack of flour over SLS’s head.]

    SLS: There’s still some six-month-old flour in here. It’s suprisingly delicious.

    CD: Ew! This place reeks!

    SLS: Yes! Are we in my dad’s basement?

    [A Bigfoot-like creature in a green suit appears behind Mega and slams his head with a big ol’ slob of cheese.]

    Mega: THE HUMANITY! NO NOT THE CHEEEESSSSEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!

    Jar Jar: You are not being creative, Mr. Bigfoot Guy!

    [The Bigfoot creature slams a bigger slob of cheese on Jar Jar’s head.]

    Jar Jar: 😖….yeah this is not very creative to put cheese all over me…

    [Flashes to a scene where SLS still has the bag over his head, eating flour.]

    SLS: Okay, now the flour is seven months old. Hmm. Tastes like rotten chicken.

    https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/donthugme/images/3/36/HELP_2/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/368?cb=20140921152732

  57. ༼ つ◕_◕ ༽つ give BATFOLD ༼ つ◕_◕ ༽つ

  58. Since I think some of those symbols are in different languages, I’mma gonna try one myself but a bit different

    {> O_O}> GIVE BATFOLD I WANNA BE THE FIRST TO COMMENT ON MY FRIEND ORIGAMILUKE’S STORY

  59. Here was my prototype from r/thanosdidnothingwrong back when everyone was saying “GIVE BAN,” and this prototype is pretty terrible:

    (\0–0)\

  60. I think What Doesn’t Kill You Simply Makes You…

    Stranger.

    I finished the Dark Knight, I hadn’t finished it because it was way too long

  61. By 2020 I think I’ll basically be old friends with…
    1. CD
    2. Mega
    3. Jar Jar
    4. OrigamiLuke100
    5. Camster
    6. Shrignold (that pesky bee)

    And I’ll be normal friends with:
    1. kidloki108 (if he stays on the EU, he’s the newest one)
    2. Noah
    W. Howard the Doodle

    Meesa just bein’ predictive. 2020 is in, like, two years, after all. Oh, wait, it’s October. I guess…a year and a few months?
    Anyways, if Jar Jar becomes my friend, he’ll get cheese all over his head every day.

  62. Oh…look…it’s Jar Jar Binks on a bag of string cheese…he likes it, doesn’t he?

  63. Maddox was just here yesterday on the TalkZone page.

  64. Well he’s back mah bois! Also Mega meet me in the comment section of Thorigami.

  65. SLS
    1.
    2.
    W.
    Lol
    I find your theory …. intriguing

  66. BEWARE
    DA
    CHEESE
    JAR JAR I’M COMING FOR YOU

  67. The cheese is a lie

  68. jar jar’s cheese, dem pesky bees, Barnacle Boy laid an egg…

    (I’m unoriginal I’m sorry)

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